人教版英語八年級下冊寫作—環(huán)境保護(hù)課件

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2022年人教版英語八年級下冊寫作—保護(hù)環(huán)境Lead inWriting現(xiàn)在我們周圍的環(huán)境污染越來越嚴(yán)重。作為一個中學(xué)生，我們應(yīng)節(jié)約資源，保護(hù)環(huán)境，從我們身邊的小事做起，做一個“低碳生活”的中學(xué)生。請以“My Low-carbon Life”為題，寫一篇短文描述自己的“低碳生活”。內(nèi)容包括：1.地球的污染越來越嚴(yán)重，我們能看到森林被砍伐、水污染和空氣污染；2.你是怎樣從身邊小事做起，做到“低碳生活”的。如：每天步行上學(xué)、離開教室及時關(guān)燈和電扇、充分利用紙張、節(jié)約用水等；3.號召更多的人加入到“低碳生活”中來。作文要求：1.不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校真實(shí)的名稱和學(xué)生的真實(shí)姓名；2.語句連貫，詞數(shù)80個左右。 Step 1 審題—找關(guān)鍵信息 Step 2 列提綱—確定結(jié)構(gòu) Step 3 遣詞造句寫作文基本步驟現(xiàn)在我們周圍的環(huán)境污染越來越嚴(yán)重。作為一個中學(xué)生，我們應(yīng)節(jié)約資源，保護(hù)環(huán)境，從我們身邊的小事做起，做一個“低碳生活”的中學(xué)生。請以“My Low-carbon Life”為題，寫一篇短文描述自己的“低碳生活”。內(nèi)容包括：1.地球的污染越來越嚴(yán)重，我們能看到森林被砍伐、水污染和空氣污染；2.你是怎樣從身邊小事做起，做到“低碳生活”的。如：每天步行上學(xué)、離開教室及時關(guān)燈和電扇、充分利用紙張、節(jié)約用水等；3.號召更多的人加入到“低碳生活”中來。1.審人稱2.審時態(tài)3.審體裁4.審話題囗第一人稱 囗第二人稱 囗第三人稱 囗過去時 囗現(xiàn)在時 囗將來時囗記敘文 囗議論文 囗應(yīng)用文 囗說明文 文章屬于哪類常考話題？________________________________自然環(huán)境Step 1 審題 Step 2 列提綱—確定結(jié)構(gòu) Part 3. 號召號召更多人“低碳生活”Part 1.引入Part 2. 做法陳述環(huán)境污染，引入低碳生活。步行上學(xué)，及時關(guān)燈，節(jié)約用紙、用電等?，F(xiàn)在我們周圍的環(huán)境污染越來越嚴(yán)重。作為一個中學(xué)生，我們應(yīng)節(jié)約資源，保護(hù)環(huán)境，從我們身邊的小事做起，做一個“低碳生活”的中學(xué)生。請以“My Low-carbon Life”為題，寫一篇短文描述自己的“低碳生活”。內(nèi)容包括：1.地球的污染越來越嚴(yán)重，我們能看到森林被砍伐、水污染和空氣污染；2.你是怎樣從身邊小事做起，做到“低碳生活”的。如：每天步行上學(xué)、離開教室及時關(guān)燈和電扇、充分利用紙張、節(jié)約用水等；3.號召更多的人加入到“低碳生活”中來。地球污染越來越嚴(yán)重Step 3 遣詞造句Part 1. 引入從環(huán)境污染到“低碳生活”地球污染：earth pollution? 越來越：比較級結(jié)構(gòu)，more and more嚴(yán)重：serious/heavyThe pollution on earth is becoming more and more serious. As we all know, the pollution on earth is becoming more and more serious. 升級我們能看到森林被砍伐、水污染和空氣污染。Step 3 遣詞造句Part 1. 引入從環(huán)境污染到“低碳生活”We can see people cutting down trees, water pollution and air pollution. No matter where we go, we can see a lot of people cutting down trees, polluting water and air. 升級沒學(xué)過被動語態(tài)，該如何避免？see sb. doing sth看見某人正在做所以，養(yǎng)成保護(hù)環(huán)境的習(xí)慣很重要。Step 3 遣詞造句Part 1. 引入從環(huán)境污染到“低碳生活”It is very important /of great importance for us to develop the habit of protecting the environment.There is no doubt that it is important for us to develop the habit of protecting the environment.高分萬能句型1：There is no doubt that…再升級My Low-carbon LifeAs we all know, the pollution on earth is becoming more and more serious. No matter where we go, we can see a lot of people cutting down trees, polluting water and air. There is no doubt that it is important for us to develop the habit of protecting the environment. 總 結(jié)Step 3 遣詞造句Part 2. 做法你是怎樣從身邊小事做起，做到“低碳生活”的。如：每天步行上學(xué)離開教室及時關(guān)燈和電扇充分利用紙張節(jié)約用水等邏輯詞first of allwhat’s morein additionlast but not leastStep 3 遣詞造句Part 2. 做法你是怎樣從身邊小事做起，做到“低碳生活”的。過渡+點(diǎn)題What’s my low-carbon life like in my everyday life?具體做法：First of all…; Besides…Last but not least…Step 3 遣詞造句Part 2. 做法要點(diǎn)： 1. 每天步行上學(xué)。1. I walk to school every day. 2. I go to school on foot every day. 加原因First of all, I walk to school every day. Walking is not only good for the environment, but also for our health. Step 3 遣詞造句Part 2. 做法要點(diǎn)： 2. 離開教室及時關(guān)燈和電扇。1. I turn off the lights and fans in time when I leave the classroom. 2. I turn off the lights and fans in time when leaving the classroom. 再升級Besides, I save the energy by turning off the electricals in time, such as lights and fans, when leaving the classroom.同主語省略先總后分，有條理Step 3 遣詞造句Part 2. 做法要點(diǎn)： 3. 充分利用紙張，節(jié)約用水等。充分利用：make full use of…節(jié)約用水：save water連詞成句Last but not least, I always make full use of paper and never waste water.加頻度副詞強(qiáng)調(diào)My Low-carbon LifeAs we all know, the pollution on earth is becoming more and more serious. No matter where we go, we can see a lot of people cutting down trees, polluting water and air. There is no doubt that it is important for us to develop the habit of protecting the environment. What’s my low-carbon life like in my everyday life? First of all, I walk to school every day. Walking is not only good for the environment, but also for our health. Besides, I save the energy by turning off the electricals in time, such as lights and fans, when leaving the classroom. Last but not least, I always make full use of paper and never waste water. 總 結(jié)要點(diǎn)1要點(diǎn)2要點(diǎn)3、4Part 3. 號召號召更多人 “低碳生活”高分萬能句型2： ...is not only the business of the..., but also the responsibility of each of us.Step 3 遣詞造句Protecting the environment is not only the business of the government, but also the responsibility of each of us.號召更多的人加入到“低碳生活”中來。Part 3. 號召號召更多人 “低碳生活”高分萬能句型3： Even a small effort can make a great difference, so let’s take action from now on to...Step 3 遣詞造句Even a small effort can make a great difference, so let’s take actions from now on to live a low-carbon life.號召更多的人加入到“低碳生活”中來。呼應(yīng)點(diǎn)題My Low-carbon LifeAs we all know, the pollution on earth is becoming more and more serious. No matter where we go, we can see a lot of people cutting down trees, polluting water and air. There is no doubt that it is important for us to develop the habit of protecting the environment. What’s my low-carbon life like in my everyday life? First of all, I walk to school every day. Walking is not only good for the environment, but also for our health. Besides, I save the energy by turning off the electricals in time, such as lights and fans, when leaving the classroom. Last but not least, I always make full use of paper and never waste water. Protecting the environment is not only the business of the government, but also the responsibility of each of us. Even a small effort can make a great difference, so let’s take actions from now on to live a low-carbon life.成文Sentence Structures① There is no doubt that it is important for us to develop a habit of...② ...is not only the business of the..., but also the responsibility of each of us.③ Even a small effort can make a great difference, so let’s take action from now on to...萬能句型①毫無疑問，養(yǎng)成閱讀的習(xí)慣對我們很重要。There is no doubt that it is important for us to develop a habit of reading.萬能句型② 做家務(wù)不僅僅是家長的責(zé)任，也是我們每一個人的責(zé)任。Doing chores is not only the business of the parents, but also the responsibility of each of us.萬能句型③即使是小小的努力也會產(chǎn)生很大的影響，所以讓我們從現(xiàn)在開始采取行動幫助別人。Even a small effort can make a great difference, so let’s take actions from now on to help others.萬能句型