Unit 4 A good read 單元話題滿分寫作 講義

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八年級英語下學(xué)期單元話題滿分寫作 Unit 4：A good read 單元話題：reading habits “閱讀習(xí)慣” 范文1 1．假如你校的英語角準(zhǔn)備開展以“My reading habits”為主題的演講。請根據(jù)下表所提示的要點(diǎn)寫一篇短文簡要介紹自己的閱讀習(xí)慣。 注意：1. 表達(dá)中必須包含所給要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯。2. 詞數(shù)90左右。開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 My reading habits I love reading. ______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】I love reading. I spend about 5 hours a week reading different types of books. On weekdays， I usually read for about half an hour before going to bed. I read a lot at the weekend. I am interested in history books. They can improve my knowledge of the past. I get most of my books from the library. Sometimes I buy books from the bookshop near my home. My teacher gives me a lot of advice on books. I often meet my friends to discuss what to read. Reading is always a wonderful time. Good books are good friends. They help me relax after a busy day. They also open up a whole new world to me. 【解析】 試題分析：這是一篇話題作文。本文給出了一些要點(diǎn)，并給出了作文的開頭。我們要做的就是用正確的英語把要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象說出自己的觀點(diǎn)。動筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)來寫，要注意主謂一致等問題。寫作中要適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。 寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文語句通順流暢，表達(dá)了每一個要點(diǎn)，段落清晰。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。 考點(diǎn)：話題作文。 范文2 2． 要想獲取知識，那么我們就離不開閱讀。我們應(yīng)該從小就培養(yǎng)良好的閱讀習(xí)慣，把閱讀作為終身的愛好。請以Reading Is a Good Hobby為題目，寫一篇英語短文。 要求：1. 表達(dá)清楚，語法正確； ???2. 80詞左右。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Reading Is a Good Hobby With development of science and technology, new knowledge comes every day. If you stop learning even for a day, you will be lost. Reading is a good way to help you keep in touch with the outside world. Read widely and you’ll be rich in knowledge. Reading is also a good way to relax yourself. You can get a lot of fun in the books. A good book is a good friend to comfort you when you are unhappy. So long as you have a good book at hand, you’ll never feel lonely. Every valuable book will open a new world before you. 【解析】 這是一篇話題作文，主要論述閱讀如何是很好的愛好。我們可以從作文要求獲得信息：閱讀可以獲取知識。此外我們可以根據(jù)自己對閱讀的理解結(jié)合自己的詞匯量及掌握的句式進(jìn)行發(fā)揮。例如，閱讀是我們自我放松的方式，書籍是人類的朋友，書籍可以開放我們的思想，可以使我們開眼看世界等等。在寫作中要注意語言的邏輯性。 點(diǎn)睛：這篇短文首先介紹知識更新快不學(xué)習(xí)就會淘汰，然后通過一句“Reading is a good way to help you keep in touch with the outside world.”引入正文，這種導(dǎo)入方式自然，得體，非常值得我們學(xué)習(xí)。之后，介紹閱讀可以豐富我們的知識，是自我放松，娛樂的方式，當(dāng)我們悲傷時書籍還能像朋友一樣讓我們舒適等等。短文流暢，富有邏輯，語言豐富，用詞得當(dāng)，是一篇不可多得的好文章。 范文3 3． 假如你是李芳，某報(bào)社記者來你校采訪，想了解一下學(xué)生們的讀書習(xí)慣。請你根據(jù)下列提示，寫一篇短文談?wù)勀愕拈喿x習(xí)慣。 1．我喜歡閱讀，每周花差不多三小時閱讀； 2．對歷史書感興趣，最喜歡讀的是中國的四大名著； 3．我的大多數(shù)書都是圖書館借的和書店買的； 4．關(guān)于讀什么書，老師們常常給我意見； 5．書是好朋友，讀書幫助身心放松，也給我打開一個新的世界。 【答案】I love reading. I spend about three hours a week reading. I'm interested in history books and the four great classical Chinese novels are my favourite .I get most of my books from the library and the book shops. My teachers often give me advice on what to read .Books are my good friends. Reading helps me relax and it also opens up a new world to me. 【解析】 考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。本文主要應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱為第一人稱。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。參考短語和句型：love doing sth, spend some time doing sth, be interested in, great classical Chinese novel, give sb. advice, help sb. do sth. 動名詞作主語等等。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。 【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。如：With development???of science and technology，It takes me three hours to read the books every week等，學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。 范文4 4．請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容，寫80~90詞左右的短文。要點(diǎn)如下： 1. 我非常喜歡閱讀，每周我花費(fèi)5個多小時閱讀各種類型的書籍； 2. 其中，我最喜歡閱讀羅伯特·路易斯·史蒂文森（Robert Louis Stevenson）的小說，因?yàn)槲野l(fā)現(xiàn)他們太精彩了； 3. 比如，《金銀島》（Treasure Island）講述的是一個小男孩的故事。他出海航行，尋找寶藏； 4. 故事給了我很大的信心。讀完這本書，我不再像以前那樣害羞； 5. 將來，我也想…… 要求:???1. 要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)使句子通順，連貫； 2. 第5點(diǎn)展開合理想象，發(fā)揮1~2句。 _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】I like reading very much. I spend over seven hours a week reading different types of books. Among them I like reading the novels of Robert Loius Stevenson because I find them really exciting. For example， Treasure Island tells us the story of a young boy. He sails the sea to look for hidden treasures. His story gives me a lot of confidence. After reading the book， I am not as shy as I used to be. I also want to travel and have exciting experiences in the future. 【解析】 試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文，題中已經(jīng)給出了明確的要點(diǎn)，而且要點(diǎn)給的非常詳細(xì)。寫作時可以可以緊扣要點(diǎn)，將其內(nèi)容完整的翻譯出來，再進(jìn)行適當(dāng)?shù)你暯雍脱a(bǔ)充，就能完成這篇作文。但注意不能只是逐字逐句的翻譯，要使用一些連接詞，使文章更加緊湊，邏輯更緊密。 寫作亮點(diǎn)： 這篇文章要點(diǎn)齊全，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確流暢。文中用了很多非常有用的表達(dá)方式，例如spend some time doing sth.花時間做某事；different types of 不同種類的；look for尋找；used to過去常常；in the future在將來，等等。而且文章用了一些銜接性的短語，如For example例如；After reading the book在讀書之后；also也；等等。 考點(diǎn)：提綱類作文。 范文4 5．（2021·全國·八年級課時練習(xí)）假如你是楊森，你的英國筆友Sally對中國文化很感興趣，她希望你能給她介紹一些經(jīng)典的寓言故事。請你根據(jù)下面的提示及要求，給Sally寫一封郵件，給她講講“狐假虎威”的故事，然后請她談一談對該故事的看法。 提示： 1. 很久以前，一只老虎在森林里抓到一只狐貍，想吃掉它； 2. 狐貍告訴老虎它是被派來做百獸首領(lǐng)的，如果老虎吃了它，后果會很糟糕； 3. 老虎不信，就跟在狐貍后面看其他動物是不是真的怕狐貍，結(jié)果動物們一看到老虎就都逃走了，老虎以為他們害怕狐貍，所以把狐貍給放了。 要求： 1. 包含提示內(nèi)容，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使全文連貫； 2. 詞數(shù)：80詞左右（郵件的開頭、結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。 Dear Sally, I’m glad that you are interested in traditional Chinese stories. Today I’ll tell a story about a tiger and a fox. __________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ What do you think of the tiger and the fox? I’m looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Yang Miao 【答案】參考范文 Dear Sally, I’m glad that you are interested in traditional Chinese stories. Today I’ll tell a story about a tiger and a fox. Once upon a time, a tiger caught a fox in the forest and wanted to eat him. But the fox told the tiger that he was sent to be the leader of all the animals. The consequences would be terrible if the tiger ate him. The tiger didn’t believe him, so he followed the fox to see if the animals were afraid of the fox. The animals all ran away as soon as they saw the tiger. The tiger thought they were scared of the fox, so he let him go. What do you think of the tiger and the fox? I’m looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Yang Miao 【解析】 1.題干解讀：這是一篇電子郵件寫作。要求給筆友Sally講講“狐假虎威”的故事。要包含所有要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。 2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時，開頭結(jié)尾用第一人稱來書寫，第二段主體部分用第三人稱書寫。寫作時可分為三段式：第一段感謝Sally對中國文化如此感興趣；第二段結(jié)合要點(diǎn)介紹“狐假虎威”這個故事；第三段寫期待收到Sally的回復(fù)。在寫作時應(yīng)該注意符合故事情節(jié)，同時注意語言的準(zhǔn)確性和連貫性，可適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充細(xì)節(jié)使文章連貫。 范文6 6．（2021·山東歷下·八年級期末）假如你是李梅，你在美國的筆友Jim正在參加一個漢語文化項(xiàng)目，發(fā)Email向你請教“塞翁失馬”的故事。請用英文給他回一封Email。 內(nèi)容包括： 1）簡述塞翁失馬的故事經(jīng)過； 2）說說你對故事的看法。 要求： 1）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱； 2）詞數(shù)100左右。 注：blessing???n.好事??????????disguise???n.掩飾，偽裝 Dear Jim, I am happy to know you are learning about Chinese culture. The story “Sai Weng Lost His Horse” is also called “A Blessing in disguise”. ________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Dear Jim, I am happy to know you are learning about Chinese culture. The story “Sai Weng Lost His Horse” is also called “A Blessing in disguise”. Once upon a time, there lived an old man. Later, he was called “Sai Weng”. One day, his horse ran away. People came to comfort him. The old man said: “It may be a good thing!” After a few months, the horse led several horses back. When the old man’s son rode a horse, he fell off and broke his leg. Many people felt bad for the old man. But he said it might be a good thing. After a year, a war happened. All the young men took up arms to fight. Most of them died. But his son didn’t go because of his broken leg. The story tells us every coin has two sides. No matter what you meet is “blessing” or “disaster”, you should keep a happy mind. Yours, Li Mei 【解析】 1.題干解讀：該題目以記敘為主，要求在電子郵件中給筆友介紹一下中國“塞翁失馬”的故事，并發(fā)表自己對故事的看法。題目已給出開頭，我們寫正文就好。 2.寫作指導(dǎo)：介紹故事時，主要用第三人稱，時態(tài)采用一般過去時，簡單介紹“塞翁失馬”的故事就可以。最后用第一人稱，發(fā)表自己對這個故事的看法，時態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時。 讀書時間每周約5小時，就寢前閱讀（或自擬內(nèi)容）喜愛的書歷史方面（或自擬內(nèi)容）書的來源書店購買、圖書館借（或自擬內(nèi)容）建議獲取老師、朋友（或自擬內(nèi)容）閱讀原因（自擬內(nèi)容）