人教版八年級(jí)下冊(cè)英語(yǔ) Unit 3 Could you please clean your room？滿分話題作文范文與解析 學(xué)案

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人教版八年級(jí)下冊(cè)英語(yǔ) Unit 3 Could you please clean your room？滿分話題作文范文與解析 學(xué)案 1．假設(shè)你是麗莎(Lisa),某英文報(bào)刊正在就“Should Teenagers Help Their Parents with Housework”這一話題展開征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)自己的體會(huì)，寫一篇短文向該報(bào)社投稿。 提示：1. What’s your opinion (觀點(diǎn)) about it? 2. Why should teenagers help their parents with housework? 3. What are the advantages (好處) of doing housework? 要求：1. 語(yǔ)句通順、符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2. 不少于70詞。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 Dear Sir or Madam, I think that _____________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours truly, Lisa 【答案】Dear Sir or Madam, I think that teenagers like me should help our parents with housework. First, doing housework makes us independent. We can’t depend on our parents all the time. So we should learn how to take care of ourselves now. Second, doing housework is a kind of physical exercise. It helps us stay healthy and strong. Third, since we live in a house with our parents, it’s fair for us to work together and make the house clean and comfortable. All in all, doing housework helps us to learn life skills and understand the idea of fairness. So I think teenagers should learn to enjoy doing it with our parents. ????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????Yours??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????Lisa 【解析】 【詳解】 本文是根據(jù)自己的體會(huì)，寫一篇短文向該報(bào)社，所以句子的主語(yǔ)用第一人稱，句子的謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，所寫的句子應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)法，要使用高級(jí)的句式和詞匯。短文用了一些短語(yǔ)和句式，如：help sb with sth幫助某人做某事；take care of 照顧；it is+形容詞+for sb to do sth,make sth +形容詞；enjoy doing sth喜歡做某事。用了that，since引導(dǎo)的從句，增加了文章的亮點(diǎn)。 2．學(xué)生做家務(wù)不僅可以培養(yǎng)勞動(dòng)意識(shí)，而且有利于掌握一些生活技能。假設(shè)學(xué)校正在開展“珍愛親情，我愛做家務(wù)”的征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你針對(duì)該話題寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文。 要求:1.條理清楚，語(yǔ)義連貫，句式規(guī)范。 2.詞數(shù)100左右，文意開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 As a middle school student, I think doing housework is good for me. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 As a middle school student, I think doing housework is good for me. First, doing housework can not only develop my ability to look after myself well but also make me independent. After all, I can’t depend on others all my life. Second, doing housework can help share my parents’work. It can also improve the relationship between my parents and me. Finally, doing housework can keep my room tidy, so I can have a comfortable place to live and study. In short, it’s really good for students to do housework at home. 【解析】 【詳解】 題干解讀：題目要求對(duì)學(xué)生做家務(wù)這一話題，發(fā)表自己的看法，講述學(xué)生做家務(wù)的一些好處。這是一個(gè)話題作文，題目中只給出了寫作的話題，而具體的寫作內(nèi)容，需要學(xué)生們自己發(fā)揮想象力進(jìn)行詳細(xì)地闡述。短文應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)、第一人稱來(lái)敘述。 例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文寫得非常優(yōu)秀，文章是總分總的結(jié)構(gòu)，層次清晰。第一段點(diǎn)明文章主旨，下面從三個(gè)方面敘述了做家務(wù)的好處，使用了First, Second和Finally，敘述詳細(xì)、清晰。最后用一句話作總結(jié)。句式結(jié)構(gòu)文章，符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)需要。語(yǔ)法規(guī)范、語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確。 高分亮點(diǎn)： 短語(yǔ)：As a middle school student；is good for；look after；After all；depend on；all my life；keep my room tidy；have a comfortable place to live and study；In short。 句型：I think doing housework is good for me.；First, doing housework can not only develop my ability to look after myself well but also make me independent；Finally, doing housework can keep my room tidy, so I can have a comfortable place to live and study.；In short, it’s really good for students to do housework at home 3．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)提示及要求，以Let’s help our parents do chores為題，寫一篇英文倡議書。 要點(diǎn)提示： （1）父母工作繁忙，我們應(yīng)該分擔(dān)家務(wù)； （2）我們可以做的家務(wù)有：整理床鋪、打掃房間，洗衣服，洗餐具、倒垃圾等。 寫作要求： （1）包括所有要點(diǎn)提示，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫； （2）80詞左右 (開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。 Let’s help our parents do chores Dear students, Helping our parents do chores is one of the best ways to care about them._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Doing chores is not difficult, but it means a lot. From now on, let’s help our parents do chores. 【答案】例文 Let’s help our parents do chores Dear students, Helping our parents do chores is one of the best ways to care about them. Our parents are always busy with work. They are tired after work, but they still have to do chores. If we help them do some chores, they will have more time to rest. And sharing housework can help us understand our parents better. So we should help them do housework as much as we can. In fact, we can do lots of housework at home. For example, we could make the bed, clean up the room, wash clothes, do the dishes and take out the trash. Doing chores is not difficult, but it means a lot. From now on, let’s help our parents do chores. 【解析】 【詳解】 1.題干解讀：題目要求以“Let’s help our parents do chores”為題，根據(jù)寫作要點(diǎn)寫一篇倡議書，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。 2.寫作指導(dǎo)：首先第一部分，指明要幫助父母做家務(wù)的原因以及做家務(wù)的好處，此處人稱主要為第三人稱；其次第二部分，談?wù)勎覀內(nèi)粘Ｉ钪锌梢宰龅募覄?wù)有哪些，此處人稱主要為第一人稱；最后總結(jié)感受，此處文章已給出結(jié)尾。全文時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，行文時(shí)要涵蓋要點(diǎn)提示，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，思路清晰，層次分明。 4．在一堂英語(yǔ)課上, 老師組織全體同學(xué)開展有關(guān)“做家務(wù)活”的小組調(diào)查活動(dòng)。 假設(shè)下表是你所做的小組調(diào)查記錄, 請(qǐng)你根據(jù)記錄信息, 用英語(yǔ)向全班同學(xué)進(jìn)行匯報(bào)。 要求: 1. 將表格信息全部用上。 2. 適當(dāng)發(fā)揮, 談?wù)勀銓?duì)做家務(wù)活的看法。 3. 詞數(shù): 60～80個(gè)。(開頭及結(jié)尾已給出, 不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)) Dear class, Good morning! Now let me report the discussion work in our group.____________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thanks for listening! 【答案】Dear class, Good morning! Now let me report the discussion work in our group. Li Ming cleans up rooms at weekends and Lin Mei likes cooking dinner with her mother. Wang Jie sometimes washes clothes for her family. As for me, I usually help my father water the flowers. In my opinion, it is necessary for us students to do some chores. By doing chores, we can help our parents and understand them better. We’ll also learn to take care of ourselves. Besides, we can relax ourselves from hard work and develop our abilities. That’s all. Thanks for listening! 【解析】 【詳解】 在一堂英語(yǔ)課上, 老師組織全體同學(xué)開展有關(guān)“做家務(wù)活”的小組調(diào)查活動(dòng)。 假設(shè)下表是你所做的小組調(diào)查記錄, 請(qǐng)你根據(jù)記錄信息, 用英語(yǔ)向全班同學(xué)進(jìn)行匯報(bào)。注意文中使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，第一段主語(yǔ)用第三人稱單數(shù)，最后一段用第一人稱，寫作時(shí)，要注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式的變化。另外，還需要使用一些句型和短語(yǔ)，使整篇短文意思連貫，表達(dá)流暢。 【點(diǎn)睛】 作者寫作時(shí)，還使用了較為豐富的句型，如Wang Jie sometimes washes clothes for her family；In my opinion, it is necessary for us students to do some chores.這些給文中增色不少。 5．假如你是李明，下表是你所做的一項(xiàng)關(guān)于“做家務(wù)活”的討論記錄，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)這個(gè)記錄用英語(yǔ)向全班同學(xué)做一個(gè)匯報(bào)。 提示：1.匯報(bào)內(nèi)容：你和同學(xué)所做的家務(wù)活；你對(duì)做家務(wù)活的看法； 2.詞數(shù)：80左右，匯報(bào)的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 Dear class, Good morning! I`m Li Ming. Now let me report the discussion about housework in our group. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thanks for listening! 【答案】Dear class, Good morning! I`m Li Ming. Now let me report the discussion about housework in our group. Wu Jun cleans up rooms at the weekend and Jia Mei likes cooking dinner with her mother. Wang Ping sometimes washes clothes for her family. As for me, I usually help my father water the flowers. In my opinion, it is necessary for us students to do some housework. By doing it, we can help our parents and understand them better. We’ll also learn to take care of ourselves. Besides, we can relax ourselves from hard work and develop our abilities. That’s all. Thanks for listening! 【解析】 【詳解】 這是一篇材料作文，也是一篇演講稿。假如你是李明，下表是你所做的一項(xiàng)關(guān)于“做家務(wù)活”的討論記錄，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)這個(gè)記錄用英語(yǔ)向全班同學(xué)做一個(gè)匯報(bào)。本文人稱主要第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。仔細(xì)閱讀提示和要點(diǎn)、注意事項(xiàng)。這些要點(diǎn)構(gòu)成寫作的基本框架。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，適當(dāng)使用連詞，敘述的條理性。根據(jù)提示要點(diǎn)，列出本文的寫作提綱，提綱包括所有提示要點(diǎn)。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無(wú)拼寫、語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤（時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致等）。本文提綱： 尊敬的同學(xué)們： 早上好！我是李明?，F(xiàn)在讓我報(bào)告一下我們小組關(guān)于做家務(wù)的討論。吳軍周末打掃房間，賈梅喜歡和媽媽一起做飯。王平有時(shí)為家人洗衣服。至于我，我通常幫我父親澆花。在我看來(lái)，我們學(xué)生有必要做些家務(wù)。通過(guò)這樣做，我們可以幫助我們的父母，更好地理解他們。我們也會(huì)學(xué)會(huì)照顧自己。此外，我們可以放松自己，從艱苦的工作和發(fā)展我們的能力。 就這些。謝謝你的聆聽！ 【點(diǎn)睛】 這篇文章語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，敘事清楚，時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用正確，敘述清楚條里，語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，是一篇不錯(cuò)的文章。學(xué)以致用，運(yùn)用了重要句型和短語(yǔ)有：As for me/ In my opinion/ it is necessary for us students to do some housework./ Besides, we can relax ourselves from hard work and develop our abilities.等。（1）學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。（2）列好提綱和要點(diǎn)及需要的重要短語(yǔ)或句型。（3）切忌堆砌詞語(yǔ)、句子，注意運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞使句子流暢、連貫。注意表達(dá)的順序。 （4）注意書寫的規(guī)范：大小寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)等的正確運(yùn)用。（5）注意檢查：?jiǎn)卧~拼寫、語(yǔ)法、動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)序、主謂一致等。 6．假如英語(yǔ)老師想知道你們班全體同學(xué)做家務(wù)的情況，作為班長(zhǎng)，你為此進(jìn)行了一次調(diào)查。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的調(diào)查結(jié)果，用英語(yǔ)寫一份80詞左右的調(diào)查報(bào)告。 要求：1.語(yǔ)句通順，行文流暢； 2．必須包含表格中所給內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。 【答案】There are thirty－two students in our class.Most of us do shores at home.Eighteen students clean their living rooms every day.They think it's very interesting.Eight students make their beds after they get up in the morning.They hate doing it.They say it's boring.Four students enjoy washing clothes and folding clothes.They think they're relaxing.Only two students don't do any chores at home.I think it's bad for them.They should spend some time on chores and learn to be independent. 【解析】 【詳解】 這是一篇材料作文，根據(jù)表格中的調(diào)查內(nèi)容，給英語(yǔ)老師介紹一下調(diào)查結(jié)果。時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。文章開頭使用there be句型介紹班級(jí)人數(shù)，然后引入話題，多數(shù)學(xué)生在家都會(huì)做家務(wù)。接下來(lái)根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容，逐個(gè)介紹調(diào)查結(jié)果即可，包括人數(shù)，所做家務(wù)的內(nèi)容，笑臉表示喜歡like，哭臉表示不喜歡hate，然后說(shuō)明其原因。最后談?wù)勛约旱挠^點(diǎn)。同時(shí)選擇合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡句，使文章具有一定的連貫性。 NameChoresLi MingClean up roomsLin MeiHelp Mom cook dinnerWang JieWash clothesIWater the flowersNamesHouseworkWu JunClean up rooms at weekJia MeiHelp mother cook dinnerWang PingWash clothesI……StudentsChoresLikes or dislikesReason18clean the living roominteresting8make the bedboring4wash clothes，fold clothesrelaxing2………